This is my second draft from my contents page. After receiving feedback from the class I took it on board and made a few changes. The biggest change /i made was removing the red box around the features and placing in two red lines. With the red box i think ti made the contents page look to full and cramped and it also made it look quite childish. I changed the colour of the Dyson image to black and white due to some people saying that there was too much colour. I changed it to black and white because they are neutral colour's which are two out of the three dominant colours in my magazine. The old image had too much colour in it like pink, yellow, green and blue which made it not fit in. When I received feedback from my teacher I added in some extra things like the lines under the regular/every month section to make it fit in and I find that this makes the contents page more accessible. I am very happy with this draft, and I am going to attempt to receive more feedback in case there is anything thing else to change that I have left out.
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