In class, I recieved feedback of my front cover, contents page, double page spread cover and double page spread. I printed them and laid them out and then recieved feedback from my peers.
Love the cover of the dps!
Also the dps is great only change I would make is the first page being white
and perhaps it fading into grey instead of the black. Good house style
throughout and all match. Make text on cover larger.
Would change the red and
white writing under the image on your last page and the images to the right of
your last page are blurred. Would make the puff better other than that its
really good! I like the first two pages of the dps, really nice and different.
More cover lines on cover
page, the contents page is really good. The image on the first page of your dps
is a bit blurry and make the puff stand out more.
House style isn’t very clear
and images are all slightly blurry.Font is too plain for the genre selection.
Use better fonts.
Good colour scheme used
throughout , lots of pictures with captions to clearly show what is going on,
the masthead is unique and good for a
music magazine, the dps is very realistic and would get a mark band 4, the
large L behind the text gives a realistic look.
Good use of colour scheme
throughout – clear house style, love the pictures used throughout.
Front cover is a little
empty.Contents is very easy to navigate around but contains perhaps a little too much information.
Double page spread is very
good, good house style .
Overall very good magazine
first draft.
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